Redaction ( english lessons)

Yesterday my sister was in a motorbike accident and she is lucky to be alive.

She had been at a disko and was coming home with Cristian (boyfriend) on his motorbike.

She wasn't wearing a helmet, so she was really lucky that she wasn't badly injured.

I think that my sister was wrong to get on the bike without a helmet. 

I would have phoned a friend or phoned my parents.

I don't think that this will happen again my parents are angry and they have grounded haley for two weeks. 

She is probably learnt her lesson now.